For the brave ones… #5
Dear Workshop participants - this is our fifth exercise, related to the topics we have discussed in the sixth meeting. Good luck!
I wrote this little short story in the DRAMATIC MODE:
“Mom, I have something to tell you…”
“Not now, I am making a cake.”
“But, Mom!… It’s important!”
“More important than your birthday cake? We have fifty guests tonight!”
“It is the most important thing in my life, Mom…”
“I know, your birthday, that’s why I’m in a hurry! Your father’s boss, Colonel McGregor, will be here in a couple of hours, and all our friends from the club, and…”
“I’m not talking about the party, Mom… It’s about this thing I have to tell you. I need to know your opinion.”
“Oh, you’re eighteen now, my little baby… you can manage your own problems, can’t you?”
“Mom, but I…”
“Can’t we talk about it later, after the party? I still have a hundred cucumber sandwiches to prepare… Want some?”
“MOM!”
“All right, tell me at once! You’re making me nervous!”
“I have a boyfriend, Mom… and I invited him to the party tonight.”
“Oh, such a fuss!… What is the problem? You can invite anyone you want, it is your party, my little baby… Wait a minute… Did you say…’boyfriend’, Michael?!?!?”
Your task is to write new versions of the story using these types of narrator:
First version: Neutral Omniscience
Second version: ‘I’ as witness
Third version: ‘I’ as protagonist
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